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My fabulous new AGENT!

Yes, it's true.  I have an agent!  An amazing, talented, living, breathing, BIG TIME agent!  If you've read The Book Thief or I am the Messenger by Markus Zusak, or the Ranger's Apprentice series by John Flanagan, or The Year Nick McGowan Came to Stay by Rebecca Sparrow, then you already know a lot about the fabulous taste in books of agent . . . Catherine Drayton at InkWell Management!

Seriously, I am SO excited.  No, excited isn't the right word.  I am EUPHORIC!  Catherine's confidence and faith in Hush blows me away.   

Now for the dirt. 

I enjoy immensely reading other authors' journeys, so I thought I'd post a little bit about how Hush went from a few small ideas ponging around in my head to a 300 page young adult romantic suspense novel. 

I started writing Hush five (yes, five) years ago.  J was hunting for a birthday present for me, and came across a listing for community education classes.  He debated between Japanese cooking and an online writing class.  He knew I loved writing from the volumes and volumes of journals I'd written and hung on to from my growing-up years, so the writing class won out. 

After I'd finished three chapters of Hush, I figured it was a good time to send them out to literary agents and see if they thought I had a shot at getting published (my knowledge of the industry was truly amazing, I know).  About a week after mailing the sample chapters, I got two requests to see the full manuscript.  I went into crisis mode and, in the space of ten days, finished writing the novel and mailed it back.  Needless to say, I was rejected. 

Then, one year ago, I dug the story back out and decided I was mature enough and ambitious enough and knowledgeable enough about the real way the industry works to try writing and submitting Hush again.

It took two-and-a-half months to write the novel and the moment I typed the words The End, I started querying.  I mean, the novel was done, right?  Finished, completed, el fin.  

Er, no. 

After garnering several more rejections, and letting the manuscript marinate on my hard drive, I started rewriting.  I cut over two hundred pages.  Chop, snip, slice. 

Then I mailed it out again.  Better results this time, but no cigar. 

So I rewrote again. This time only a hundred pages had to get sent to the recycling bin.  I was getting closer. 

I mailed the story out again.  Even better results . . . small bites . . . but not The Big Bite. 

So I rewrote a fourth time.  This time I did major damage.  No holding back.  I put everything I had into the manuscript.  I caught my second wind and I ran with it. 

Then I mailed the story out and held my breath. 

Within five days, I had three offers of representation.  I could hardly believe it. 

The moral of the story?  Yeah, I didn't think I needed to spell it out.  :)


And now for the shoes.  MY NEW AGENT SHOES.  My I-HAVE-AN-AMAZING-AGENT-AND-I'M-TAPPING-ALL-OVER-THE-PLACE shoooooes. 



       
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Wow, good for you! That is such an amazing story of never giving up and rewriting til you really had a blow-me-away novel. I'm in the midst of my third rewrite so it's gratifying to hear about your success at getting Marcus Zusak's agent! You're definitely in the big leagues now....
Thanks, ipgirl!
Congrats, Becca :) I'm so happy for you!
Thanks! And thanks for all the help. It's always nice to refer to someone who's already been through this :)
Congratulations, Becca!!!

I'm still dancing for you. And those shoes are GORGEOUS! ;)
Yeah, I love the shoes:) Thanks for all the help with this whole process - you're the best!
Awesome!! I love hearing stories like this!
Thanks! I know what you mean - reading all the good news on Verla's is the only thing that keeps me going some days :)
Congratulations!!! What a great story of your journey, too. I really love seeing how hard writers work to succeed, and it sounds as if you are one writer who will NOT give up. Awesome. I'm friending you btw :-)
Angie, I friended you back :) BTW, I can't wait to read your novel. I am a huge action/romance fan, and I remember reading the blurb for your book and thinking, "I'm so buying that!"
Oh... Come on! What's the moral! I'm horrible at this stuff. Can't you just spell it out for me. Wait! I've got it...

The Moral - "Buy a good shredder!"

No!

Crap!

Congrats anyway. CD is the tops! Nice Job! Can't wait to hear about the next part of the journey.

(Oh... and thanks for sharing your story, very inspiring)
YES! You got it. Buy a good shredder. I was kind of worried nobody was going to get it . . .
Here via [info]kazdreamer

Congrats!
Thanks!
I knew the first time I read a chapter of Hush, Hush that you'd be here. Your writing voice is amazing. I'm so glad you stuck with it. Your a great example of how hard work pays off.

Damn, that sounds so freaking mushy!

Congratulations!
Patty, you're so good to me :) Thanks for all the wonderful critiques and putting up with me for so long.
Speaking as a fellow writer who scored who own fabulous agent only a few months ago, congratulations!!! What an amazing feeling, right?!? And those are some awesome shoes! =)
It IS an amazing feeling :)
I'm here via [info]patesden to congratulate you! Thanks for all the details -- it's so helpful to read success stories.

I was wondering -- did you do your rewrites based on agent feedback? Critique group feedback? Or based on your own intuition?
All three :)
Congrats! (kazdreamer sent me here.)

Congrats Becca and major points for the persistence! (kazdreamer also sent me :) )
That is so awesome, Becca!! Congratulations! And good luck with the rest of the journey!

Mary Ann
Thanks Mary Ann :) It does feel like a long journey some days . . .
Huge congrats!!!
thank you! Can't wait for your good news :)
Honey, that's more like five new pairs of shoes news!
CONGRATULATIONS!!!!
Yeah, or six. Or seven. :)
Thanks!

random commenter

congratulations that is fabulous!

Re: random commenter

I like random commenters :)
Beautiful dog, btw.
And thanks!
CONGRATULATIONS!

thanks so much for sharing your journey
and i know how excited you must feel!
here's to a quick and awesome sale through
your awesome agent! YAY!!
Thanks Cindy. I loved your journey story over on Verla's. Amazing.
YAY BECCAJOY!!!

Great news! Congratulations!!
When you're finished dancing, there's a glass of cyberchampagne for you. :)

Seriously. Congratulations doesn't begin to cover it!
Thanks for sharing your journey - I do love reading those. And congratulaitons!
Congratulations! And - fabulous shoes! =^)
Thanks! I'm wearing my shoes today :)
Followed you over from the blueboards! Awesome!!! Congrats and here's to a Super Fast Sale!
Thanks! Great userpic btw.
Saw you on Verla's. Great story -- love it and am so glad you stuck with this story!! Congratulations! And, your shoes are awesome!
Great story! Thanks for sharing it. I'll have my fingers crossed for you.

Kim

PS the shoes rock!
Thanks! Is that a hawk in your userpic? I saw one up close the other day and about freaked out. They are HUGE.
Every good agenting deserves shoes. Congrats!
Thanks!
Congratulations!!!!
~Julie
Thanks, Julie. Love your blog!
Over from Verla's too...CONGRATS!!
And thanks for sharing your story! I'm going through the same motions on my first MS. I have too much faith in the story to shelve it. You've renewed my determination! :D
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